tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8586450397369280599.post3117638155472095203..comments2023-07-05T03:53:20.503-06:00Comments on The Laws of Making: Showing Involves SpecificityDeren Hansenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11260147750947135832noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8586450397369280599.post-5077632828618022752010-12-15T09:43:59.212-07:002010-12-15T09:43:59.212-07:00Another way I've heard this idea expressed is ...Another way I've heard this idea expressed is to find the one or two <b>telling details</b> that best characterize the person, place, or thing.Deren Hansenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11260147750947135832noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8586450397369280599.post-9403798983307911592010-12-15T07:08:55.375-07:002010-12-15T07:08:55.375-07:00Excellent advice! I love reading specific, detaile...Excellent advice! I love reading specific, detailed description, but I do tend to go on with it for too long in my own writing.Matthew MacNishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03264738483763244969noreply@blogger.com