I should probably begin by explaining the flotilla of flummoxing flamingos.
Here's the offending line:
The next morning, Penderwick's front walk was blocked, again, by a flotilla of flummoxing flamingos.
It all came about because my friend, Pat Martinez, invited us to play with the present participle in adjective form.
"We can take a plain old verb and change it to a present participle by simply adding ing. We can then use it to modify a noun. Notice the fun language and description that comes to life."
It was a fun little exercise, but fun can lead to trouble: now I need to know who Penderwick is and why he seems to be afflicted with flamingos.
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What is a "flotilla"?
ReplyDeleteA naval term for a large assemblage of ships, usually for transport.
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